ORDER OF CRITIQUE

Here, we tackle your work and not your personality. I honestly don't give a damn if you're young or if you haven't learned this stuff in school--point is, that's why we'll teach you. Be grateful enough that someone is spending their precious time to point out your errors.

I am not here to praise your drivel. If it sucks, I'll tell you up-front that it does. I won't lie to you and let you loose to just further humiliate yourself with your shitty writing. If you want to be a writer, you should learn to accept criticism. Just be sure to keep up with our pace and you'll learn much more than if you start ranting on how cruel we are in regards to giving you feedback. I am not your mom. I am not your friend. I don't care if your fragile ego gets crushed. Yet, I'll be very objective. And if you know how to rise from failure by admitting your flaws and trying to improve, I am very much sure that you'll have the potential to come up with a piece, worthy to be called a literary work in the future.

Now, these are the things that we could teach you...

1. THE FUNDAMENTALS
• Spelling
• Punctuation
• Grammar
• Paragraph
• Word Usage
2. IN-DEPTH ANALYSIS
• Style
• Plot
• Canon and Fanfiction
• Mary-Sues vs Original Characters

There may be other concerns that you may have which are not listed above. If there are any other queries, feel free to contact me.

All my cordial clients will be treated with respect, I would assure you that.

--Coryne

THE BOX

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